Thursday, March 12, 2009

March 12, Theme #6 Introduction

I like the first website  http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html.  I like this one because its splits it up so it is easier to understand.  I have trouble writing thesis statements so this site is helping a little.

My thesis will go something like this: Ernesto Guevara's goal was to fight imperialism while tackling many obstacles along the way eventually making a vast political and social impact on the world.


1 comment:

  1. I like the first link, too. I like it because the website gave examples of bad thesis statements as well as examples of good thesis statements.
    I like your thesis statement, but I think you should try and narrow your focus; it is a little too broad.

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